Wednesday, June 16, 2010

Were have all the good men gone, and where are all the Gods?

Alright, it's Wesnesday. I promised I'd be helping myself with my writing, so here it goes. I'll post a little bit of story, how about some feed-back?

Prologue



Ever Hills is not your typical sixteen-year-old in Laguna Beach, California. She was one week ago, though. She thought Justin Bieber was the ultimate hottie, all that mattered was how she looked, and getting her VW Bug was all she wanted for her birthday. Once she woke up on July 6th, she not only had a shiny new car, but shiny new powers.
Most teen witches you hear about are losers, dorks, freaks, right? Well, it’s quite the opposite with Ever Hills. She was popular, beautiful, and liked by most. What she is going to have to learn isn’t only how to use her powers, but how to tell her best friend Milania, and her other best friends, Skylar, Carson, and Gia, and make sure they keep her secret from the rest of the world. This is going to be harder then she imagined.


Alright, leave me your comments? X's and O's, Hannah.

3 comments:

  1. I love that! I also love the name Ever, it's so pretty.
    And your blog layout is awesome, too!

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  2. eeeeeeeeek ofcourse it's okayy to follow me ;) i love your blog tooo :) it's hott (H) xxx

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  3. Thank you. (: It's sort of in the starting stage. . . X's and O's, Hannah.

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